1001 (Guest)
on Chapter 5
Thu 26
Feb 202608:03AM UTC
True, uzi could still tell other humans and information spreads. Sure others won’t trust her but its out there. Then J could know by hearing human talking about it. Does N even take her orders seriously? He would tattle for his gain. I know its not the intention but thats what I read N as. In both canon and here.
The condition that N suffers from is called reversed Stockholm syndrome, where normally the victim falls in love with the kidnapper, but here it is the opposite. N, who is the kidnapper (the hunter), fell in love—or let's say admiration—with his victim (the prey), and wants to be her friend even though she had hit his head and threatened him with her weapon. However, he admires her bravery and her refusal to give up even in front of a vampire like him, so he wants to be her friend.
Well, I tried to find a reasonable way for him to start liking her. I'm not very good at writing romance, so I hope it isn't a bad decision, do you think it is a bad decision?
1001 (Guest)
on Chapter 5
Thu 26
Feb 202610:05AM UTC
Did you tag the relationship correctly? There is no Uzi Doorman/N tag. I was lead to believe it was J/N. Or is just friends. Well for the writing, i do not know. I dont think it is bad. I like to wait and see what you cook up before giving an opinion.
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